Review: The Feedback Loop Books 1-3 by Harmon Cooper

The Feedback Loop Books 1-3 (The Feedback Loop #1-3)My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Harmon Cooper adds to the “on the rise” genre of LITRPG with The Feedback Loop series. The Protagonist is Quantum Hughes. The series starts off with him stuck in a virtual world which he calls “The Loop” because every day is the same. He is also the only actual person in this virtual reality world for the past two years, so when another actual person appears it throws Quantum’s “life” into a tailspin.

This series is highly entertaining if you are into this new Genre. If you are new to LITRPG then this would be a good introduction. Each novel is fairly short but full of humor, action, and adventure!

The only thing I found lacking with this story is that there does not seem to be enough consequences for Quantum’s violent behaviors, and so far there has been no progression of character to learn to handle his anger issues. These are parts of his character but I feel that there was not enough growth for him to overcome these behaviors which should be hampering him in a civilized society.

Jeff Hayes does a great job narrating and bringing the characters in this story to life. There are some effects used on his voice that is done in moderation and only serves to enhance the experience.

** I was provided a copy of this book in exchange for a fair and honest review **

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Review: Steamborn by Eric R. Asher

Steamborn
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Synopsys:
Steamborn is about Jacob, a young man with a gift for mechanics and pick-pocketing. Jacob lives in the Lowlands, the slums of the mountain city Ancora. When the towering city walls – that have protected the Lowlands and its people from the creatures that live outside of the city in what is called the Deadlands – are breached and fall Jacob and his family and friends must flee to the Highlands, the wealthy part of the city. Jacob and his friend Alice stumble upon a terrible secret about the truth behind the attacks on the Lowlands.

Review:
I was excited about this new series from Eric R. Asher, as I enjoyed his The Vesik Series: Books 1-3. I have not read many novels of the steam-punk genre, So I was even more interested in giving it a try. I was not disappointed!

What I enjoyed most is the world this novel is based in. There is a rich and deep history full of mysteries, many of which go unanswered in book 1. Not only is the city and world surrounding it written well, the political tensions and intrigues are also done very well. Every character carries with him or her pieces of this history or political conflicts making each character an integral part of the overall story.

I found the writing in Steamborn more polished than in the Vesik series. In my review of The Vesik Series Books 1-3, I stated there was an issue I had with repetitive reactions. I found absolutely none of that in Steamborn, and the overall feel was more polished.

I experienced this novel through Audiobook. The Narrator was Saskia Maarleveld. I found her narration quite enjoyable. The voices were all performed excellently. Each character was consistent and distinct.

My only complaint is that the story ended too soon as I was not ready to end my journey with Jacob, Alice, and Charles! I look forward to the next book in this series, Steamforged!

Check out Eric R. Asher’s site here: http://www.ericrasher.com/

Check out Saskia Maarleveld’s site here: http://www.saskiamaarleveld.com

Disclaimer: I was voluntarily provided this free review copy audiobook by the author, narrator, or publisher

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